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fiction Short Fiction

The “Cursed” Amulet

A Misadventures of Montoya and Rose short story “This is not the amulet, Rose,” Montoya hoists up a necklace with chunky turquoise beads and a centerpiece of a carved flat stone. “This is the amulet of protection,” he purses his lips, “if the name were to be directly translated…”  Rose sniffs, crossing his sweaty arms. […]

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Advice

Easy to edit but it’s a killer in your writing: Filtering

Originally posted to Instagram on July 11, 2021. Edits for clarity and grammar have been made. What is filtering? Filtering is when you add unnecessary words to your document explicitly telling the reader what the character sees, hears, feels, and thinks. It’s the most obvious in first person POV, but it occurs in third person […]

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Opinions Writing in General

What Constitutes “Bad Writing” and Why Are We Bothered By It?

We all know what a bad book is, as in, when we hear someone say “this wasn’t a good book”, we know precisely what they’re talking about. I want to dive deeper into elements that make up a “bad book” or “poor writing”, then I want to explore why we’re so bothered by it.